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short...sweet....and to the point....not long and drawn out....I like the structure and the way that it flowed as I read...never astraying from the original content was another thing I noticed... your multi's were on point the imagery was aiight and the vocab fit it's purpose....Overall good shit Fam ....Keep at it .
would like some feed on this from experienced writers.
very cool poetry, it flowed so well and most of all it was very original. alot of the OM's are called different things but are about the same stuff. i liked this joint, good read, only thing i could say is try to get more in depth. i havnt seen your other work but a longer verse, some multis and just show you got skillz.
peace
lets see if i can squeeze a bit more juice outta this.