Malicious(OI) vs. Lokeye(SV)

vote - http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=299143

mal aint blowing up, but losing this battle you cant refuse
ill hand this dick tha upper hand,
...since the bottoms tired of his abuse
decent, but not that hard
think you top notch? please lok'll take aim where you stood
mal be asking for tips, but i dont think money'll do him good
again decent, nothing special
your nothin but pussy and you cant keep relationships
yea i give food for thought, cuz thats all it do to take ya bitch
food for thought is played, any concept to me. i hear a punch with that like once a day. EVERYDAY
mal known to be superstitious, since he know he not winning
cuz id buzz you up to ma level...but i havent been drinking
meh.. weak
so wins from you ill pocket two, cuz your wackness sadens, true
your dope so why take this loss?
...when you were never even appreciated in the crew
meh decent

vs

you get help from a vet and im still pwn'n you, really, do u?
I geuss he basically ghosts 4 u, now u really gettin yo shit handed 2 u,
ight, needed to be reworded
does this bitch really think he's better den me, i always gotta fight him,
bitch says he gunna merk me, he nuttin but a hipochrit, too bad he spit like em,
nope
kid deres nuttin u can do u're career is through,
i'd lend u a helpin hand but u cant type wit 2,
nope
I wont lie kid, right now im kinda rusty, but i know my verse aint borin you,
Yea i stumbled and tripped over the bar of mediocrity, but i landed on you
ight
Kid we all know your dumb no need you always lose your L prone,
so i suggest u Don't let your mind wander. Its too small to be alone,
[b]meh ok, just needed to be reworded.

this battle was pretty close.. none really had any quotable lines..

so in the end it comes between best bars..

so wins from you ill pocket two, cuz your wackness sadens, true
your dope so why take this loss?
...when you were never even appreciated in the crew

vs

I wont lie kid, right now im kinda rusty, but i know my verse aint borin you,
Yea i stumbled and tripped over the bar of mediocrity, but i landed on you

i find it really hard to vote for anyone on this, coz i felt the verses were so weak but.. w/e mals was harder.. barely..

vote - malspicous

dont have
have enough 2 poll but here feed bitches.


mal aint blowing up, but losing this battle you cant refuse
ill hand this dick tha upper hand,
...since the bottoms tired of his abuse
iight
think you top notch? please lok'll take aim where you stood
mal be asking for tips, but i dont think money'll do him good
lol iight
your nothin but pussy and you cant keep relationships
yea i give food for thought, cuz thats all it do to take ya bitch
mehh
mal known to be superstitious, since he know he not winning
cuz id buzz you up to ma level...but i havent been drinking
o.k
so wins from you ill pocket two, cuz your wackness sadens, true
your dope so why take this loss?
...when you were never even appreciated in the crew
o.k but eeehhhh medicore drop nuffin speical stood out but
it was iight stay constiant 2 the fact every bar was average iight verse

vs.
you get help from a vet and im still pwn'n you, really, do u?
I geuss he basically ghosts 4 u, now u really gettin yo shit handed 2 u,
wack. TOO MANY U'S IN THIS BAR RUINED FLOW N WDF
y is feeble center of attention now? no still
does this bitch really think he's better den me, i always gotta fight him,
bitch says he gunna merk me, he nuttin but a hipochrit, too bad he spit like em,
weak near wack
kid deres nuttin u can do u're career is through,
i'd lend u a helpin hand but u cant type wit 2,
iight
I wont lie kid, right now im kinda rusty, but i know my verse aint borin you,
Yea i stumbled and tripped over the bar of mediocrity, but i landed on you
iight, yea u r fuckin rusty though
Kid we all know your dumb no need you always lose your L prone,
so i suggest u Don't let your mind wander. Its too small to be alone,
weak. disappointing verse i mean seriously this shit is on some
weak shit really weres the wordplay n shit? no where
n dam idont how u getttin votes fl is where some wack shit
nowadays dam. i think cuz of this verse u will be gettin
cut son from the yak pak.

v/lokeye clearly had the better verse.
meh battle should be way better.

uppin #5 and wordzworth i dont get you voting mal got mostly nope and shit but he still wins ??? watever man

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Sir Preme.

vote - http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=299143

mal aint blowing up, but losing this battle you cant refuse
ill hand this dick tha upper hand,
...since the bottoms tired of his abuse
decent, but not that hard
think you top notch? please lok'll take aim where you stood
mal be asking for tips, but i dont think money'll do him good
again decent, nothing special
your nothin but pussy and you cant keep relationships
yea i give food for thought, cuz thats all it do to take ya bitch
food for thought is played, any concept to me. i hear a punch with that like once a day. EVERYDAY
mal known to be superstitious, since he know he not winning
cuz id buzz you up to ma level...but i havent been drinking
meh.. weak
so wins from you ill pocket two, cuz your wackness sadens, true
your dope so why take this loss?
...when you were never even appreciated in the crew
meh decent

vs

you get help from a vet and im still pwn'n you, really, do u?
I geuss he basically ghosts 4 u, now u really gettin yo shit handed 2 u,
ight, needed to be reworded
does this bitch really think he's better den me, i always gotta fight him,
bitch says he gunna merk me, he nuttin but a hipochrit, too bad he spit like em,
nope
kid deres nuttin u can do u're career is through,
i'd lend u a helpin hand but u cant type wit 2,
nope
I wont lie kid, right now im kinda rusty, but i know my verse aint borin you,
Yea i stumbled and tripped over the bar of mediocrity, but i landed on you
ight
Kid we all know your dumb no need you always lose your L prone,
so i suggest u Don't let your mind wander. Its too small to be alone,
meh ok, just needed to be reworded.

this battle was pretty close.. none really had any quotable lines..

so in the end it comes between best bars..

so wins from you ill pocket two, cuz your wackness sadens, true
your dope so why take this loss?
...when you were never even appreciated in the crew

vs

I wont lie kid, right now im kinda rusty, but i know my verse aint borin you,
Yea i stumbled and tripped over the bar of mediocrity, but i landed on you

i find it really hard to vote for anyone on this, coz i felt the verses were so weak but.. w/e mals was harder.. barely..

vote - malspicous

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agreed
Vote for mal cus he had some decent consistancy in punches and creativeness on metaz and multie punches...he had a better verse than lokeye. lokeye had more played concepts than Mal and some of his punches didnt punch!

V/MAL

Vote DQed...wack.

-Fue

mal aint blowing up, but losing this battle you cant refuse
ill hand this dick tha upper hand,
...since the bottoms tired of his abuse
mal known to be superstitious, since he know he not winning
cuz id buzz you up to ma level...but i havent been drinking
so wins from you ill pocket two, cuz your wackness sadens, true
your dope so why take this loss?
...when you were never even appreciated in the crew

vs.

I wont lie kid, right now im kinda rusty, but i know my verse aint borin you,
Yea i stumbled and tripped over the bar of mediocrity, but i landed on you

lokeye-Flow was tight and punches were mostly good setups were nice and the wording was also good
Malicious-Flow was good but punches were meh you had one ok punch you culdve came alot stronger setips and wording werent the best either

\/-Lokeye

mal aint blowing up, but losing this battle you cant refuse
ill hand this dick tha upper hand,
...since the bottoms tired of his abuse
nice
think you top notch? please lok'll take aim where you stood
mal be asking for tips, but i dont think money'll do him good
ok
your nothin but pussy and you cant keep relationships
yea i give food for thought, cuz thats all it do to take ya bitch
no
mal known to be superstitious, since he know he not winning
cuz id buzz you up to ma level...but i havent been drinking
lol
so wins from you ill pocket two, cuz your wackness sadens, true
your dope so why take this loss?
...when you were never even appreciated in the crew
ok


vs


you get help from a vet and im still pwn'n you, really, do u?
I geuss he basically ghosts 4 u, now u really gettin yo shit handed 2 u,
lol nice
does this bitch really think he's better den me, i always gotta fight him,
bitch says he gunna merk me, he nuttin but a hipochrit, too bad he spit like em,
ok
kid deres nuttin u can do u're career is through,
i'd lend u a helpin hand but u cant type wit 2,
lmao
I wont lie kid, right now im kinda rusty, but i know my verse aint borin you,
Yea i stumbled and tripped over the bar of mediocrity, but i landed on you
lmao
Kid we all know your dumb no need you always lose your L prone,
so i suggest u Don't let your mind wander. Its too small to be alone
lmfao


my vote is for Malacious, both had really good verses. But i was feeling Mals punches were a little harder. I also fel that he had better wordplay. Both had good structure and flow. Good job to both.

v//MAL


Vote DQed...your banned for obvious reasons.

-Fue

meh, wack battle. both sucked ass, i've seen so much better from Mal. i have a feeling hes been half assing it for a while now, i'm seriously dissapointed. Lok, you have potential, your wordings on point, just your concepts are wack as hell. both competitors were meh, but seriously i think that Malicious won this pretty easily.

weak personals and played lines both ways, Malicious just had the least of the bad shit present in this battle. do better guys, do better ...

v. Malicious.

think you top notch? please lok'll take aim where you stood
mal be asking for tips, but i dont think money'll do him good
this could have been good, ill quote it anyway.

vs

you get help from a vet and im still pwn'n you, really, do u?
I geuss he basically ghosts 4 u, now u really gettin yo shit handed 2 u,
haha, you should have capitalized REALLY tho.


mal aint blowing up, but losing this battle you cant refuse
ill hand this dick tha upper hand,
...since the bottoms tired of his abuse
That sounds like your jerking him off. Your under homosexual suspision.

Vote Mal i liked his quotable more.

Not really anything quotable

vs

you get help from a vet and im still pwn'n you, really, do u?
I geuss he basically ghosts 4 u, now u really gettin yo shit handed 2 u,
Lol... Nice

Lol.. I think Mal took this with the better overall punch of this battle. Both came bland to me seeing that I expected more. But it was an ok battle. I have to say Mal's punche's were alot harsher & landed more direct.

v/Mal.


Vote DQed...wack.

-Fue

Vote - Malicious

This was a kool battle. A lot of playedness in both verses but there has to be a winner. This was actually closer to me than what the votes are putting it out to be. Lokeye, i think i remember you from awhile back. Anyways, your verse was sub-par. Wording was horrible but some concepts were decent. Mal, you had harder punches that were less played and besides your wording was a tad bit better. This is a old battle but definitly worth voting on. Anyways, no hate to neither.

peace....