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preciate it na mean
How do you feel reading the lines of a Mad Man.
I liked it. Clever little rhyme and amusing with the code, thats cool. Although, i think the coding could have been more complicated, but that has nothing to do with the piece, just my opinion. The vocab use was good...the word placement you chose and story line was used for a poem style om, just short. Cool topic name to match the style, i like it, good job, also with the encoding, that was cool. Stay up.
lines were too short
rhymes werent that good
nice vocabulary though
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Originally Posted by bestdeepthroatalive
WEll, have you heard of structure and Form