Motivated Killers

^thanks all.

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Originally Posted by Cry

are you saying that you could read it better if i changed the font and centered it? lmao, stfu kids.

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to be fair to them....that's not what structure is,but they probably don't nkow that lol

this shit is cool

at first i thought this is gonna be one of those pieces where really common rhyming was gonna flow all through it, in some ways it was, but you seemed to switch it about in a way that took away the 'standard flow' if you know what i mean, i thought the ending was the best part, but it was pretty consistant, also i liked what you were saying it didnt rattle on, boring me like some OMs these days do. BUT im not saying this was great, cos in some places it was kind of repetative, overall though an enyojable read

my advice would be to keep away from typical rhyming, throw in some crazy shit, nah mean, so people are like 'whoa that couple of bars there was off the map'

anyways pz... stay up

Dope peice Aaron. The flow and wordplat was wonderful. The structre was nice but niot like your othe peices meaningless to say. The creativity was Ill. Keep it up man 9-10 as well.

~Lex

thanks Dev, thanks John ..