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aiight fanx man i appriciate it good comments i lyked them ......uppin.......

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i really liked this. i actually saw what you were talking about as i read it. nice imagry. your wordplay was nice, your flow was decent, your structure was good. great job mc, stay up. and btw you need links or Brixton will close this. peace.

thanks for the info hun.......more feed please.....................

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yo this was a dope peice topic was good nice to see some originality imagery was off da chain sick with that every line seemed like a ill line almost like a whole song made of punchlines flow was tight when along with the story complexity was good as well nice to see some of that structure was good fuck it everything was good stay up
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it was a gd piece but sum thing was missin, the passion and shit if u wud have experienced it ur self then it wud be more to heart but cz u dant it didnt have that something,i liked your ryme scheme and ur rymes the structure was ight aswell this isnt ur best work but keep rytin

and leave feed on ma hate om please