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True Prophet-Loved the way you started your verse off. Kept it consistent. Imagery & vocabulary were not bad. Your Rhyme scheme was ok but it was hard to follow, well at least for me (I dont read too much open mics :/). Decent verse.
TheUnderated-Cool and creative verse. Vocabluary was good. Imagery was ok, could've been better. Good flow throughout your verse. Nice job.
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