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nice job all three of u u got into tha topic street life real good and stayed on it... all three parts were good
The feed we've been getting sucks. This is better off considered closed. Sorry great peaice. But people need ot give better feed. This will get closed cuz of the horrible feed.
this was aite nothin special...
smokey: you extened ur lines and the structre waz just fucked up
you could improve ur vocab , multis and shit
casss:your one was decent good and very good all in one
u told a story and developed it more in ur group i.e with
smokey and symphonic..improve vocab
symphonic:ya one waz aight ..not too bad..i like the words u used but they
could be improved alot
ur structre waz alright and how u ended it waz superb..*actually
good*
Thanks.
no problem homie..
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this piece good but not great, the flow was pretty tight it was the best part for all of you's, but you guyz need to throw in multies and get more complex wit some 2 or 3 or more syllable rhyming but you did have some good emotion so overral this was str8
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