Cramped For Lives

Someone give this piece to the history teacher....Very sad piece, BUT true. It's hard keeping a flow to something like this, but you did it. The whole main body structure was excellent, I would'nt change a thing. Very on point and discriptive, not to mention the facts also thrown in there. I'm not to good at giving critisism, cuz all the pieces I read all seem better than mine, but I like seeing all the shit thats still being talked about (Studied), come out in the form of a rhyme. If there is something I WOULD change, its the intro and outro poem, does'nt really follow a 'rhyme 2 rhyme' structure, but it's all good, cuz you just described the biggest talked about part of the holocaust in under 30 lines. Dont know what else to say, great piece, enjoyed reading it, keep it up!