"Dry Ink" PB Collab!

please explain your feed nastra

i like this peice because of a couple of reasons, it has alot of emotion in it, and i like emotion in a good OM peice, its the backbone of every peice anyone will write on these forums. It had very complex wordplay, which isnt really the best thing to use in a peice, but it was used in small porportions, and was pulled off effectively. Good source of flow and structure. Id give this a 8.5/10 - 9/10 based on the fact that the wordplay at times got abit too smart, and got boring, and made me want to stop reading it abit. but other than that, this was a nice, congrats.