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Treazon you have an interesting way of writing shit down...Its what truly seperates you from alot of cats on here, I truly believe tho you could of elaborated more on the topic...It was too open ended, or did I just read it incorrectly? But your quality in writing is definately up there...Good shit...

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this was an alright peice,you had some nice shit in there,but it just wasn't complex enough for me,I need a shit load of intellect to really enjoy a peice,but that's just my personal preferance.......but I cansee why most people like this,it was quite well writte and the description in every line was very impressive,you have a lot of imagery in this peice and the structure was god as well,all in all this was a good peice,but I would have liked it to be a bit more complex.......but nice job dude.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=294961
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thanks..i try to incorporate as much complexity in my pieces as i can normaly..but this piece i wasnt goin for the real complex feel

as I said this was still a good peice and you have obviously got a lot of skill.I'll look out for more peices from you

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yea this was pretty good....topic was interesting...
flowed well....good rhymes and nice vocab usage...
Complexity was nice....imagery was tight throughout
nice multies overall...strucutre was like perfect.......
I liked this overall...good peice...keep it up.............

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