Tired of this Shit

lmao dude

Glad I clicked on this. Very crude... but creative. The concept you wrote on was... interesting, and because of the short length it held my interest. I do feel you could've used more crisp imagery, but that could've easily given away the true nature of the drop I suppose. Perhaps it could've been executed better, but for what it is, it's great. Thnx for the read & the laugh.

Last up, please leave some feed people.

omg.. anyone?
please? just post something

Dope Concept, It Had Me Going Till I Read The Last Line
I Like How Its Short But U Get The Point Across
I Really Enjoyed The First 4 Lines
This Was A Really Nice Piece
Had Good Multis And Metas
Overall I Would Say An 8 Or More

thats cool.... uppin

I thought this peice was quite good,I liked the multi strings that you incorporated in to this peice,they really made it flow very well.You had a nice concept here,and I liked the way you kept your lines short and to the point. Basically the only thing that I wasn't too impressed with in this peice was the lack of imagery,I felt that you could have improved on that quite a bit. But I liked this peice,and it did make me laugh. Nice work but I know you can do a lot better than this.keep at it.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=296067
^leave feed on that please

this is..lame

Greqt piece. Wordplay was nice. Flow was perfect. Structre was ok and the story was great. Keep this shit up.