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nice drop i felt some emotion coming from this piece...i do however disagree withthe whole self-glory rap...but it's what you went for...imagery i think was non exsistent..but your vokab came through towards the end of the piece...rhyming was descent i think that your use of multies was one of your better traits...keep up the good drops...i'll be lookin for more
write something important...
i dont dig tha thuggish shit...this piece was basic...needs some major complexity...your vocab was lacking..your rhyme scheme was very basic...your structure was everywhere...you need to
elevate and practice writin everyday....keep elevatin and droppin.
Cool, I can go with that Yet
I gotta stay true too me thinks for all the feed tho
No, it was just a flow nothing thuggish....read overQuote:
i dont dig tha thuggish shit
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