word@ Lady... upz nikkaz
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word@ Lady... upz nikkaz
i was feeling the emotion in this peice...that made it real tight and deep......this flow was definately here...nice smooth, enjoyable read,.....rhymes were good...imagery was good as well..and overall this was a good peice.....i liked it..keep it up..peace~..
UP RISE
upz... *FOR CLOSING*
that is a damn tight poem
cant say nothin' that hasnt been said-this was real good, you should publish your poetry cuz you've got talent
i aint leavin feed nena, you never replie back to cats who have with a simple thx.