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great peice dawg i liked whole you played of the both movies yet stayed creative and added your own twist and also great vocab and wordplay overall a dope peice
keep up the goodwork
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yo this is a pretty nice piece. i liked your topic alot espeically because it was unique and fun to read. the rhyme scheme was nice and you had a few nice multies too. The length of this piece was perfect, not TOO long and definately not too short. the structure was aight so overall this was a pretty dop piece so keep up the good work man

this was fuckin dope. topic was mad interesting. this whole peice was creative. very good imagery. good rhymes. flow was good most places some places it slacked off. overall this was a mad interesting/enjoyable/ creative read man..i really liked it. good job.