EXPOSED: The Da Vinci Con!

Cheers, Yo.

I`ve replied to your piece. Anyone else - leave links and i`ll work my way through them all!

Pz!

boris funk wat r u

Good Points - I Really Liked This Piece It Flowed Really Well, Your Imagery Was On Point And Your Vocab Was Of The Chain And I Liked They Way You Approached The Topic.... I Wouldnt Be Suprised To See This In Drop Of The Month.

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Originally Posted by Camarac

The figure to Christ's right, is NOT one of Magdalene -
But of John the Evangelist!
His effeminate forms, sentiments borne...
...from Western conventions attempt to conjour the angelic!
There's no ponderous catalyst surrounding Christ's chosen heir ..
.. Reader's are only seeing what they`re being TOLD is there!
The over-bearing, woven hair and, feminine features that you're MEANT to see…
…Are simply Leonardo -
Painting to the same conventions as his contempories.

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^ This Bit Was Flawless

Bad Points - It Was Too Short And Stretched In Places, And You Should'nt Of Put Pictures It Spoilt It In My View... But That's All I Can Fault You On.

Good Shit, Looking Forward To Seeing More From You In The Future.

This was sexy.

You kill with rhyme scheme man... way to paint a picture with a verse. Could have almost even been a little longer. But yeah... this was very nice. Actually read it in SS...


Good work my man.

Bumping this with the release of Angels and Demons.

Crazy to think this will be three years old in a weeks time!


Woah.

I guess this wasn't bad.. it seemed kind've simple at times.. bit repeatitive... you're pretty much just defending something that doesn't really need defending. I find all the concepts of the divinci code were entertaining but I never really took them seriously, more as theory or myth.. the whole bible's really kind of a thousand ideas branched into one book, everybody split them into different religions and ideas, and this is another example of a different off branch.. vocab was decent.. rhyming was off in places but this was you back in what.. 2006?? haha.. be cool to see you revise this..


- Cry

wow what a great piece...so true...right on...dam OJ u kill em evrytime...never any bullshyt...always perfect...great flow...fukin awesome conceptz...great vocab n shyt...great metaphorz n shyt....this was just a great fukin read...u said it all!!!

yo RTF on any of my dropz...