Black_Out Vs. Murder 1

murda 1 got aids
no cure for the disease you're not gonna be saved
you try to spit you try to rap
but all that bullshit you're talking is whak
and you know that
and i give you credit for that
but still you spit your silly shit trying to battle mc's
get yourself into some trouble when your battlin' me
you might not know who i am but i know who you are
get out of line i'll have the homies straight run up on your car
i get into battles never hesitate or back out
make you lose again like that time you lost to "blackout"

v/ black out coz ur not allowed to feed off ppls verse man read the house rules

black out doesnt matter if the guy fed off everything cauz your verse waz eazily betta!!! no hate!!!

Pay close attention Murda.......See these r not herbs...they're dope heads that can see a sloppy verse to a decent structure keyed verse....good drop anyway u pussie....

thanx...uppin

lol how can u call them dope heads when they dont know what fucking feeding is lol u went and got ya lil noob buddies to vote for u cause u thought i was feeding your fucking lamer then i thought

Im not gonna argue.......My final werds...*OWNED*

lol your such a fucking idiot lmmfaorofl

*owned*

Its obscene that dis faggot even wants 2 compete....
U'd pre-write 4 weeks and ur half of this battles still gon be incomplete....
Weak
Cuz ur weak.....thats it... ur flat garbage put ur intentions 2 sleep....
Cuz U beatin me cant happen especially when u lack intensity....
Meh
U became whack instantly when u were born....
Since the form of a fetus U were a failure and ur dreams were torn.....
Aiight
Never was norm....parapralegic flows got u nowhere....
Dis pussies foriegn 2 the fact I'll rip em bald wit no hair....
BOO
I'll enclose this without taking this further....
Ramurder Murda 1....whatever jst kno U have 1 flow that was mudered
Decent I guess

vs.

your garbage man,& your whole career will be shelfed
even he knows,so arrogant he talks about himself
Decent punch...LOL @ personal
your a lame fuck,but da bitch thinks he's so Hard & Street
thought he was real scary,then the fag sucked 's teeth
NOPE
lol Check out the net thug,but he knows he likes to try on wigs
i raised my hand to he's soft ass,Black_Out <-- and thas wat he did
MEH
the nerve of this herb,talking like he owns the site
i'd rip pussy to shreds,but ya moms wont be home tonight
Good
your a weak as fuck,and thats what ya rhymes be all about
& i'd keep punching his face,cuz speed bags never ware out
Weak closer

Both need work as you can both see. I think that for consistency I have to give the battle to Ramurda...he just seemed to drop harder and overall better punches. Both of you are cool with me I hope, so don't take this as d/r for either one of you...but this is just truth for me. I think both of you should go to LLL and read some battles...get some tips, which doesn't mean bite, but get ideas...good luck guys...

v/Murder1

^^^^^^^^^AT least his vote made sense....................

I voted on this...Murda..hit up my link in sig

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Black_Out

Pay close attention Murda.......See these r not herbs...they're dope heads that can see a sloppy verse to a decent structure keyed verse....good drop anyway u pussie....

thanx...uppin

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yeah if they are dope then im the pope man, they all suck



Its obscene that dis faggot even wants 2 compete....
U'd pre-write 4 weeks and ur half of this battles still gon be incomplete....
-no
Cuz ur weak.....thats it... ur flat garbage put ur intentions 2 sleep....
Cuz U beatin me cant happen especially when u lack intensity....
-hell no
U became whack instantly when u were born....
Since the form of a fetus U were a failure and ur dreams were torn.....
-ur dreams was torn part kinda blew it, toherwise nice attempt
Never was norm....parapralegic flows got u nowhere....
Dis pussies foriegn 2 the fact I'll rip em bald wit no hair....
-heh, no, selfglory
I'll enclose this without taking this further....
Ramurder Murda 1....whatever jst kno U have 1 flow that was mudered
-wtf? hell no

vs.

your garbage man,& your whole career will be shelfed
even he knows,so arrogant he talks about himself
-ok, nothing special
your a lame fuck,but da bitch thinks he's so Hard & Street
thought he was real scary,then the fag sucked 's teeth
-hell no
lol Check out the net thug,but he knows he likes to try on wigs
i raised my hand to he's soft ass,Black_Out <-- and thas wat he did
-heh, ok
the nerve of this herb,talking like he owns the site
i'd rip pussy to shreds,but ya moms wont be home tonight
-lol
your a weak as fuck,and thats what ya rhymes be all about
& i'd keep punching his face,cuz speed bags never ware out
-not good


this was a wack battle, but still, murda 1 got this one with no problem, other guy has to learn how to write punchlines.... bleh

/v murda 1

Its obscene that dis faggot even wants 2 compete....
U'd pre-write 4 weeks and ur half of this battles still gon be incomplete....
good openor

Cuz ur weak.....thats it... ur flat garbage put ur intentions 2 sleep....
Cuz U beatin me cant happen especially when u lack intensity....
aight not bad

U became whack instantly when u were born....
Since the form of a fetus U were a failure and ur dreams were torn.....
meh..ok

Never was norm....parapralegic flows got u nowhere....
Dis pussies foriegn 2 the fact I'll rip em bald wit no hair....
lol this was pretty good

I'll enclose this without taking this further....
Ramurder Murda 1....whatever jst kno U have 1 flow that was mudered....
nice closer kid... nice shit





your garbage man,& your whole career will be shelfed
even he knows,so arrogant he talks about himself
lol ight

your a lame fuck,but da bitch thinks he's so Hard & Street
thought he was real scary,then the fag sucked 's teeth
nope not feelin it

lol Check out the net thug,but he knows he likes to try on wigs
i raised my hand to he's soft ass,Black_Out <-- and thas wat he did
aight good line

the nerve of this herb,talking like he owns the site
i'd rip pussy to shreds,but ya moms wont be home tonight
lol ight this made me laugh

your a weak as fuck,and thats what ya rhymes be all about
& i'd keep punching his face,cuz speed bags never ware out
uhh.... naa not feelin it coulda came a lil harder..

overal feed back

Black-out - had nice flow through out his whole verse......came pretty hard with punches.. i think he lightend up a lil bit cuz he thought it was an easy win...but he still hada decent drop... he had a nice openor n a nice closure... his structure was on ... nice shit but ive seen a lot better frum u

Murder1- u had choppy flow... not bad... sum punches i was reeli feeling but sum wuns i wasn't at all.... unlike black out u didn't keep coming hard......ur structure was decent... but u werent on point with tha punches...nice drop besides that tho... but this basic lil things made u fuck up this battle.....

V/Black out....Reasons above

Its obscene that dis faggot even wants 2 compete....
U'd pre-write 4 weeks and ur half of this battles still gon be incomplete....
no
Cuz ur weak.....thats it... ur flat garbage put ur intentions 2 sleep....
Cuz U beatin me cant happen especially when u lack intensity....
no
U became whack instantly when u were born....
Since the form of a fetus U were a failure and ur dreams were torn.....
no
Never was norm....parapralegic flows got u nowhere....
Dis pussies foriegn 2 the fact I'll rip em bald wit no hair....
hell no
I'll enclose this without taking this further....
Ramurder Murda 1....whatever jst kno U have 1 flow that was mudered
terrible

vs

your garbage man,& your whole career will be shelfed
even he knows,so arrogant he talks about himself
nah
your a lame fuck,but da bitch thinks he's so Hard & Street
thought he was real scary,then the fag sucked 's teeth
not really a punch
lol Check out the net thug,but he knows he likes to try on wigs
i raised my hand to he's soft ass,Black_Out <-- and thas wat he did
o.k but you coulda re-worded it better
the nerve of this herb,talking like he owns the site
i'd rip pussy to shreds,but ya moms wont be home tonight
nah

i vote for murda1 for atleat dropping decent punches

v/murda1

your a weak as fuck,and thats what ya rhymes be all about
& i'd keep punching his face,cuz speed bags never ware out

N..........