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pretty ill piece,your vocab wasnt very complex...but it worked for this piece...your rhymecheme was basic but it alsoworked for this piece....although it was a bit choppy....shorter lines could fix that...i would like to see more multis in your piece....but thats me...tha story was tight..and i like how you liad it out...pretty ill piece..just work on your complexity and multis...and shorten you lines...other than that...ill piece...keep elevatin and droppin~1~
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thanx for the feed and I will.
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I HAVE TO HARSH ON YOU ALL NOW.
READ THE RULES.
CLOSED.
Reason: Read your feedback, and it was too damn vague.
-Brix.
