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this was a good piece, what i liked the most about this writtin was how you used the imagiry well, it went well with the topic and u structured it well. the concept was ok it made it easier to understand the piece all the time i was readin it. nice piece cry

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Great drop, I felt the emotion, I really felt like I was on this plane. Vocab was on point and it moved along steadily. You're imagery was there like I said I felt like I was on this plane. Good topic, it really moved me man, I never even thought of this that deeply before now. Great drop honestly, keep it up peace.

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yo good shit one of the best i read

this piece didn't get recognized too well, so let's try the fuck again.

i said again :mad: ..

I Really Enjoyed This Piece
The Imiginary Was Really Good
I Like The Concept To
Pretty Good Opener, Delivery Was Also Nice
I Like How You Used The Picture To Help Your Work
I Think Vizualses Help Paint The Picture Even More
Overall I Would Say This Was 8-9
Keep Up The Good Work :2thumb:

^thank you ..

nice piece here . i was really feelin wat u did . very nice imagery an concepts. i liked ur use of good vocab .nice way to use an accident as an om . nice very idealistic. u had nice wordin an nice consistecy thru out dis . the topic dat was chosen was also very good . different but nice. very nice topic to read off of. delivery of this piece was also very good. understandable thru out . also very descriptive . liked the use of da picture also .
nice work .