Toy Soldier

thanks untold, ur feed is much appreciated. but na i dont have a mic but i should be getting one soon so ill holla back. o and pm me the song, sounds ill.

rise

bitches

This shit was dope son!.
nice shit FAM nice shit!. i loved the concept and your vocab multies that just fuckin ripped open and blened very well. i liked your flow it went off good. the delivery was great!.
this was sheer DOPENESS on another level is what it is!.
keep it up homes.

RTF on my OM in my sig

this is some deep stuff, real good flow was amazing, good story could have been worderd better, really was feeling it and i usualy dont like topicals, amazing flow and good vocab, ill ok forward to ur next piece.
"Nothing remains, of the shooters.. the rapers, robbers, and looters
While kids and teens worship me through radio waves and computers"

thanks for the feed

wow....this peice was excellent..topic was interesting and this was pretty sad overall....i was feeling it...vocab and complexity was aight and imagery was very good throughout....rhymes were good and multies were as well....flow was smooth..and overall i felt this peice all the way..real dope..

cool

cool piece, though a little late for a proof piece... but it was good... nice flow and the rhyme shcheme was pretty tight, though some parts flowed choppilly due to not all the rhyming syllables flowing corectly. Structure was cool, and the wordplay was nice, though ive seen it in text battles in fl, like "if you dope theres no proof like d12s rosters" blah... overall this was good

hit up "Technicolor Angel" the link is in my sig

thanks

yo this shit is ill,dope everything in the book i like how u took it and turned it in this way i dont think anybody thought of doin this but u turned it into art nice flow wordplay i can go on and on wit this ~1~ om is in the sig

appreciate it

rize 2 da sky

last upp

just kiddin, uno mas

this was filled with emotion and the imagery was dope.
topic was cool. very interesting. flow was smooth and nice.
vocab and complexity was here. rhymes were good....
and overall this was a very good peice..pretty much dope.