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Nice piece. Conveyed the story well without being too long, as people have said it wasnt like a lecture, more of a creative reminder of the events that tragically happend. its flowed well and the emotion was there to read yet it wasnt too over the top. overall i liked this piece for the emotion that was portrayed.. nice job.
You really need to close this piece.
Talking no real skills listen Bucky you need to quick for real.
You not tight you not nice you got vocab you can write.
But you lack that crack that something that seperate you from whack.
You missed me with this one no hate this piece just made decent.
damn.. this was surprisingly moving for a piece that lacked the elegant flow I'm used to seeing in top notch work.. you somehow pulled off the same impact without the multi style I see so often..
well done bro. liked this alot.
Fucking dope brix.
I feel everything, although that day could never be put in to words. Nothing could ever do it justice. Such a sad day. You portrayed it really well though and set it out simply what happened, i cant believe i didnt see this earlier. Its a dope piece, there's not much to say. Good imagery and Vocabulary but most important you made people aware that people are still hurting over this event.
Peace.