My Friend?

Liked it. Striuctre was ok. Flow was great and the plot was nice. I liked the wordplay. In all 8-10 peice.

Hit up "Realism Or Fantasy".

thanks for feed everyone

upping this one last time for some feed...............

this was iight type short OM but pretty good on how u
made a clear view n imagery the whole story dcent
vocab was o.k but its jus ur 2nd nice the emotional
value was nice better then some ppl cuz u can make an
image n some ppl jus talk n change from scence 2 scence
wit out sayin nething. decent OM keep it up.

uppin for some feed from newer people.......:)

this piece was dope. imagery and emotion. i only fucked with meth once. probably wont fuck with it again, lol.. it had me feelin like I had weights in my stomach.. everytime someone spoke.. it was like a echo.. not my type of drug.. ill stick with coke.. very great work, man.. the flow was incredible.. topic was right on point.. i definitely felt the vibe on this one..... definitely my type of style, too... you should make this an audio.. if you got a mic.. it'd be dope, yo..

surely im'a keep an eye out for more.. its good to see more talent heads are startin' to drop pieces.. not only cuz i like to read em.. they also help these newer cats.. who dont know much about putting a piece together..

you've got alot of talent, man.. stay active..

good looks.