Torn

uppin for more feed please

This piece was pretty good on the emotional side however technically it wasn't as competent.....but that don't matter i like trajic shit played out good and i reckon teh way you worded this was pretty good so yeah stay up

Check this if ya got time, preciate it
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=290086

aight uppin for me feed please n thank you

uppin

this was okay girl
the 2nd line of this.. hmmmm... i wanst really feelin that becuase it fucked the holw mood of the shit the 1st line came all strong then you hoped on a whole different road but it was tight i liked this shit comin from a female though vocab was good also and the flow you brought was tight as well that made the whole thing more interesting but you still need to improve in some areas okay
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good shit

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jus re read this piece,

that's cool sounds like me in a way i know bout havin too do certin things to get by

Meh I liked it for the most part. The clothing line was best to me. Statements always impress me. But overall this was good nice and lengthy. Word keep goin.

aight uppin for more feed.
appreciate the feed from everyone else.

this is so good i had to watch it twice

aight uppin for more feed please

Sup Tor..