ladie_streetz(LF) Vs. Dusk2Dawn(TF) Crew Battle

word ^ this was alright, im not really a topical typa cat.. but... shit was pretty cool for newbs...

dusk got this one tho, decent voacab and imaginary just an overall better peice..

vote - dusk..

p.s sorry for the short vote, im like tired az fuck rite now.

if i cud vote i wud say dusk won better wordplay n more creativity i had a clear image of wat e was rytin no hate gd drops both

good battle ladie, uppin 1

uppin 2, don't ignore this.

uppin,breakdown ya votes

excellent drop both this is a dope battle.......i think dusk though with good structure and world play no hate

wow dope drop dusk your definatly a dope member of the crew we jus neda work on your wording with texting but still sweet.

Both of U were mad dope.....my vote would go to dusk....more imagery...mad wordplay and vocab.....better usage of structure....streetz drop was hot also...I thought she had good imagery and consistency which is good....but the struture and vocab didnt really take over dusks drop.....V//Dusk.........Good drop from both

Dusk

i felt your verse, cause the imagry caught my eyes. cuz the visionary was so clear to understand also the structure was amazing. the vocabulary was slightly better but str8, and also the flow was fine

Ladii Streetz

Your verse was okay as well, also the structure was clear to read, but the imagry didn't really catch me like dusk did, but you still stucc to topic, nice use of words, also the flow was str8-

v/ Dusk2Dawn.... Yo fams good piece, try to add sum multies in ya writtens....

peep the battle in my sig....

This was some good shit. Maddddd props to both sides. I cant vote, but if i could i would have taken dusk, but not by much.

thanks ya'll, uppin 3...

Okay:

Dusk:
Your imagery and the picture you painted in my head was very well placed, i thought yiour take on the topic was very well thuought out and this was a well all round written piece... your vocab was on point and didn't slip throughout... you had the emotion there, and i thought you brought it out well, a little sketchy at times, but i thought you did it to the right extent... well done.

Streets:
I didn't feel too much imagery, well decent imagery comming from your direction, i though throughout you had the potentiakl to make it dope, but just didn't word it in a monor that would strike my attention, i've seen alot better work from you and i didn't like to see you slip here, especially on an easy topic to write about... i expect better from your next drop.

Overall: dusk.

Well done... But i feel you may have had an harder job had streets been on form.