Nice drop Twixn. This was one of your better OMs but As Vlad said not nearly OMHOF material. The Imagery was good, but not really intense I don't know how you were trying to put it in but still good. The emotiomal on the other hand was pretty good and deep. The title went well but I thought that it deserves a better title but that's just meh. LMAO at the vocab though. Thatwas probably the only flaw. Maybe fixing it a bit wit the imagery would make it a OMHOF peice. But overall good drop.
7.1/10
