Both verses were written good, However Incred had most likely rushed his, as Nash said above. Your verse was simplistic however it had a potent flow and touch to it which bought oit out. Just try your best most of my work comes out quick as well. AS for cry, yeah i was feeling the emotion lyrically you were very good and the vocab therefore was noticable.
SO, basically i liked the OM and yeah good one keep em poppin from both sides
Also, can you both check my OM
Lil Suzie
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