To my beloved Josie...

I feel u though...good drop once again.

Thanks man.

I thought the best thing about this was the depth and imaginative writing that you used. The emotions seemed to ooze off the screen when I was reading it and the word usage kept me interested. The parts I thought that needed to be touched up on is the structure and the rhyme scheme could use a little work as well. But over all it is a very moving piece and I'm glad I took the time to read it through. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.

Return the Favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=288901

Thanks man, upping.

upping.