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And though this geek'll refute that he`s played in his lines ..
.. Labels are calling out for people like you - To stop wasting their time!
I`ll take affirmative action, start stompin` this fellas face ..
.. and beat him so bad, he`ll find Memory Lane`s been sealed off with the yellow tape
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v-Cam Easy.
v- Cam
its about time you started trying, although your verse was poo compared to what you can actually do. Nymph was whored in this battle, his punches were either weak with unoriginal concept, or just straight played and retarded, although the end of cams verse didnt have much of a rhyme scheme but still managed to punch a lil. one sided battle the whole way though, Cam i hope you just get back to your old self, tryin new shits cool but damn, son some mother fuckers on the way.
Vote Cam.. but it seems you're sacrificing the disses and humour for structure and composition. why not just try for both? you could do it easy
And though this geek'll refute that he`s played in his lines ..
.. Labels are calling out for people like you - To stop wasting their time!
See `round here, the ill kids have to garner respect ..
.. he`s Kyla Pratt in Dr. Doolittle 3 - That 'lil bitch is far from a vet!
cam tore it up nice shit i would have to go with Cam better verse
I wouldnt say the structure, but the composition - Yeah, in places. I am actually trying to do both in my verses now. It adds a bit of versatility, and a lot more technical aspects. You`re right, I could do it pretty easily, but im still trying to find what works and what doesnt with this 'New' style. I dont know if you remember the backlash I caught in the first week I tried this, but gradually - you kids are coming round to it, and that`s partly due to me experimenting with what works and what doesnt. Big shout outs to Exempt for his line-by-line breakdown though, because we ALL know those apply when you arent using a generic A-B scheme! Lol.Quote:
Originally Posted by COM
Good battle, Nymph.
Peace!