nah man. I have a myspace and a yahoo e-mail address though. just pm me for it. and thanx for the feedback. thanx for the title request.
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nah man. I have a myspace and a yahoo e-mail address though. just pm me for it. and thanx for the feedback. thanx for the title request.
pretty nice homie..but theres still room to elevate
firstly u need to work on vocab..extend it to higher levels and shit...
structure waz aite..
the flow waz decent
..but elevate homie..
5/10..
thanx. that's enough for me. I know my strong points and weak points. thanx for the feedback to everybody. I will improve on mah next OM.