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This was a very interesting story to read man...and i enjoyed reading it....the topic was excellent to describe what happens...the story was pretty creative and i liked how it had the man speaking then he wants to finish that was tight i liked that...vocab and complexity was no doubt here man..the helped out the imagery quite a bit..i followed the story all the way due to great flow and imagery like i said before....your rhymes were really good and good multies in places.....so overall this was an excellent interesting, pretty creative story that i enjoyed reading so i'll give this peice a 9.2/10...excellent peice..keep it up...peace~~
i'm glad you all enjoyed it...uppin for some more feed
ive pulled on the father issue... so its not a new topic... but definatly one you took at a deifferent angle... nice work here... the emotion was the centerpeice of your work... it all came together nicely you could feel it was genuine... keep at this.. i thought you droped solid here and established yourself as a decent writer.... havent read fromy u yet but i would like to see more... keep at it :)
its good to see more from you... gotta get used to the people in my crew... hah keep up the feed swapping its nice to have other writers ideas... plus have them dropping on your peices to feed and critisize on my work. toodles.
word thanks man,I'm going to be dropping more often now
i liked this OM a lot
i dont see much of this type of Topics around
i like it cuz ur bringing a new Element to da rap game
the Structure was beautiful, Flawless wordplay
the topic was str8 with nice supporting details
it had a good storyline..i belive this is a HOF type piece
Good Job :2thumb:
thanks man...glad you liked it
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This was an excellent and very creative piece. I liked it a lot, the structure was awesome, the vocab and complexity was evident. The point of view seemed to help mesh this story together and it contained great imagery. I like drops like this because they're so original and unique, instead of these stereotypical played out topics. Nice job man, I give you mad propz.
thanks man
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