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uppin.

uppin.

uppin

i cant say much other than elevation is key..

Your story was nice. i liked the scenario and you had the rhymes, just add some doper vocab, and make it more complex...simple is not the way to go...not here..

Thanks

aight. thanks for the feed. uppin.

blah, uppin.

uppin

yungvik is my alias. uppin

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Originally Posted by The Witness.

bounce basically summed it up

but this was quite good for a beginner, you had the imagery in this peice and the story line had potential,but your vocab needs to be elevated quite a bit.....you obviously know how to tell a story and you have a lot of potential, keep dropping in here and you will elevate a lot.

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i agree with witnees pak and bounce...

they sayed it all ..dope shit tho

I liked how it had the intro with the story, then it went into the real part of it with the nice rhymes and pretty nice flow..strucutre was pretty nice as well..topic was descent half interesting half not......overall i liked this but room for elevation...this showed potential...keep at it..peace~

thanks for the decent feedback plain. uppin.

aight uppin for the last time, then someone can close this.