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a yo black this OM was pretty good. not the best ive ever seen but it was pretty good. i liked yo imagery and your flow. good piece bruh
^ thank u... i thought it waz rubbish compared to my average shit..
i wrote this while i was half asleep
and there are better writers then me eg.pakaveli
Not bad. Rhyme scheme was simple yet nice. Short, blaitant, and to the point. Vocab was also simple but fit the idea. Overall not bad. Keep it up buddy.