The Death of Mr. Faith

M.a.k.e M.e S.i.g

S.o.r.r.y. F.o.r F.r.e.e.p.o.s.t.

say what dog

word pak i dont know what to say...u came good as always,but it isnt ur best.. its nice but u just need to write more and make it even more illy. and when u make record and sell it in million copies remember me :D

lol.....Preciate the comments and yeah this is a warm up, still getting used to writing again

this peice was good,it was very interesting and the imagery was spot on......this peice has nearly everything....it has dope imagery,good vocab, a very good stroy line, the only thing it is missing IMO is the structure.....it kind of made it hard to read,I don't think this is your best peice of writing but I do think it was still very good...nice job bro :2thumb:

leave feed on mine...it's called 'I just can't take it'

good OM....vocab was excellent yo..i like the story line and how u put everything together.....flow and emotion was good....structure was there also...only thing i can say that i didn't like was sometimes in some parts your lines was streched.....other then that thought u did pretty good....imagery was ok could have put more into that....but overall good job keep it up

you had some good flow, you stayed on topic an you had emotion an imagery an vocab. you did ya thang on this but it's nothin i wouldn't expect form you. every time i check out ya om's they get me hooked an i keep readin an readin it an waitin on the next om you make. but much love for ya dawg. peace out

Thanks preciate y'all takin out ya time and reading the piece....all pointers been taekn inta accoun as well......Up