Against All Odds

yo pretty chill verse/ freestyle....i liked the creativity in this the wordplay was on point most of it made sence.....it was good homie keep that shit up

^you didn't even read it

This was good. Great imagery and that was the strength of this piece. It was very storylike. A good topic and ya did well on this. The vocab was good. You need to work on structure and shorten ya lines. Ya lines seemed to lenghty for it to flow. Nevertheless, it was dope.

thanks dude