thanx.
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thanx.
this peice was okay... i wasnt really feelin it as much as ^^. not sayin its a bad peice or anything, cuz it def. had its strong points. Vocab was excellent, you dont have any problems in that area, you painted the picture perfectly, emotion was great. Although, i feel that the transition could of been better from your girlfriend to work, and then back to your girlfriend. it jus seemed a lil mixed up i guess. no hate tho 4real. great peice, jus sayin my feelings. but great job, keep it up. peace.
thanx for the feed and yeah i added that last verse think yesterday or the other day
upping for more feed
wtf uppin for feed
12 ups= closed.