this was hot
i liked the the first paragraph the most though
you used big ass words thru out the entire thing and thats all good but sometimes big words doesnt always make the shit come out hot feel me?
but this was good though to me you didnt rhyme shit but all poems dont necessarily have 2 rhyme i was feelin this thru out though i was kinda confused while reading it cuz im kinda slow 2 catch on 2 shit when its written in some other type shit from another's mind but good though
