Herasy

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uppin for the last time :)

waste of work if nobody will leave feed

The flow of this piece was excellent, structure suffered a lil but the content was in general quite explosive....i mean the technincal aspects of writing a rhyme are practically all fullfilled e.g. good meta's multies etc...but the main thing was the opiniated description. I would say this piece is by far one of your best but does not give the best message lol...Keep it up

i might of read to much but...this is real good..flowed well.lyrics and vocabs was all good.the hook that was creative how you used quotes..i personally think it would be even more better on audio... other than that real good peice of work.....keep it up man......i skipped the last verse cuz it was hurtin my eyes lol..you shoulda done a part 2 or sometihn...but what ui read was all good...

Okay, this in my opinion was a great piece... i mean the topic was very vivid, and actually kind of fucked up, but i loved your approach to this, the start of the piece stood out to me, you know mentioning not only the classic names like allah, but also Yahweh, which not alot of people seem to know as god.. your imagery in this piece REALLY stood strong in my mind, to me imagery is one of the most important factors in concocting a good piece and transforming it into dope... another thing that stood out really vividly in my eyes was the metophorical terms used, i think some people would accidently have just skimmed through and not actually fully understood your meanings on certain lines, but as you know i don't just skim through a read, i mean this was a fucking long read but too be honest i was gripped to it from start to finish, every line was not expected in my mind, i can usually predict the exact theme that is going to come next, but every verse suprsied me in a good way ofcourse... your vocabulary was very good, and you seemed to use the bigger words in the right places instead of just scaatering them randomly, thus being detrimental to your piece, but you really stayeed on track with it and i respected that alot, your gteneral approach to the topic was very well perceived and thought out, the whole piece was basically flawless, and in my eyes better than alot pieces i've read ina while... you really have a good talent man, i really do hope to see alot more from you, with this you suprised me, i knew you were a good topical head, but i was pleasently suprised to see your talent displayed here... well done, this was a great read.

true words, verse 2 aint goin offend nobody. yous sick lyrically. you can kill most of these cats in the industry.

dope piece i aint even realize how long it was until i had already read it b'cuz it was such a good read nice imagery and complexity and a good flow nothin bad i can really say just a overrall dope piece