UK Slang

uh no fine point... READ!!! rofl... stil 2 be honest i wasnt feelin this...
one thee title was.... meh... & 2nd wow! this rhymed... but on a real dow.. do u actually think this shudda been in o.m? some bars was aiite stil.. flow was pretty much there 2.. but i personally don't like this.. coz it was pretty much basic.. its like a 10 year old kid writin hes slang down... ya dig.. its not hood... but chea do elavate.. & post something better in the future.. oh & work on the titles 2 sweetheart :) 1

:thumbsdow :thumbsdow :thumbsdow :thumbsdow :thumbsdow wtf was that. dude that was a so boring to read, im still sitting here wondering why i bothered to read the whole thing, mabey cos i thort it might get betta. u had the right idea going there but on a level this is probably one of the worst pieces i have seen on here, brings a shame to the u.k. i mean if you talk like that then god help you. :thumbsdow :thumbsdow :thumbsdow :thumbsdow :thumbsdow

lol this wasnt that good. but yea im from uk and we all speak like that. definatley made me laugh. not a good drop for an o.m but a good laugh lol.

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Originally Posted by shazzzzzar

lol this wasnt that good. but yea im from uk and we all speak like that. definatley made me laugh. not a good drop for an o.m but a good laugh lol.

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uhh.. on a real.. not all of us speak like that yo.. plus that shouldnt even be in open mic... nuff ced!

this was kinda basic to me... ya rhyme scheme was pretty meh man... structure was a short kind i see... no real emotion or good word choice ya dig

vocab was avaerage, wordchoice was average

overall i'd say elevate a lil more hommie... there's room for all of us ya feel me

haha this was funny to me a not so great version of big l's ebonics at least not to read anyway but i guess if it was audio it would be coo but maybe the slang was jus weird as hell to me so i really wasnt feelin it but like homie said above me elavate more and u good

i dint mean all of the uk. i mean all from the bit im from.

were are u from? lol
coz u said all.. i thort u meant all as in "all UK" ya dig..
but yo.. ur bad! lol

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Originally Posted by Fine Point

wtf this is a rap website, not poetry shits

Open mics should be stuff that is written for a beat.

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rapping is a form of poetry you dumb fuck
anyway, i didnt like this at all. you had some good flow, but everything went downhill after that. your structure was bad, and your wordplay was awful. elevate man. pz.

whack.... who gives a fuck.... if i understood this shyt i would probably give u props but i dont your wordplay was whack structure wow.... but u jus need a lil elevation no hate tato ~!~

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Originally Posted by Fine Point

wtf this is a rap website, not poetry shits

Open mics should be stuff that is written for a beat.

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Just because somethin fits over a beat nicely doesn't make it good .. look at 50 Cent hes fucking garbage, now shut your mouth and go write something decent then talk shit. You no talent fuck.