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Damn..good peice man..you showed sum excellent strucutre and flow...made it way more easier and enjoyable to read....really good rhymes and you had a good source of imagery and complexity....vocab was nice as well.....overall this was a very good piece....keep it up.....peace
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Wow this was some serious shit.....structure was amazing....and it just had everything in it.Creativity was brilliant and imagery was excellent.Rhymescheme was brilliant also.I really don't have any bad things to say about this.It was very impressive and was my 1st time reading any of your pieces and believe me i'll be reading more.Dope drop and i'll be looking foward to the next one
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Thanks, Up & away..
alighty then REAL FEED:
ok check it the piece was great. really classical and shit. never seen something like it.
in other words original. u had lots of multies and it flowed really well. i can see this in audio. u had alot of good points and flaws bout america and stuff. but i saw some lines were forced or didnt rhyme which kinda threw that off. but none the less this piece was still art work. congrats.
^^Thanks, Last up.