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Wow.. GREAT imaginary. This was unbelievable, I didnt get it until the end. Im pretty much speachless, your OM's are like some sort of storytelling poetry. This was a wounderful piece. It was actully sad, though at first, it was kind of dull, it is very good. I dont like the structure, because its kind of hard to read. But there's no other way to put the structure, it just wouldnt seem right. I'm nominating this piece for the OMHOF. You more than deserve it. Keep droping stuff. Hopefully they'll be as good, or better than this peice.
Check my pieces
"Satan's Pain"
"Age doesn't Matter"
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word choice, multies, flow, and style always stand out to me whenever i read a piece from you. looks like u changed up ur structure......again lol at first when i read it i was like wtf kinda rhyme scheme is this or w/e but it actually reads nicely when u follow the punctuation exactly how it's written. i like the way u kinda gave the paint brush an identity and what not, but the imagery i dont think was all that amazing this time around. i mean the literature was very detailed so i dont see why i couldnt really visualize much. maybe it's just because im tired lol well.....as i just said im tired, and tired of typing as well lol
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Thanks alot, and John I'll get at those pieces tomarrow... I don't think I'll have enough time today cuz I've got to go back to school in 10 minutes for practise
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This was amazing Atticus. I really enjoyed the read. Very emotional throughout. I saw this was nominated and i would agree with them. Your writing is unlike anyone I have ever read. It is poetic/rapping and u pull it off beautifully. Keep up the great work man.
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=281687
^ Feed would be appreciated.
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Thanks alot man I really apreciate it... And I've gotta apologize about not returning the favors yet, but I promise I'll get to them during the week and leave a nice breakdown for everyone.
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hey was dat supposed 2 be a poem?nice storyline though.uppin 4 votes on haji v venomuz battle
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