Yo Yall Kept It G'd Up, Im Really Feelin Dis Cuzz, Keep It Poppin Fo Tha Fam
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Yo Yall Kept It G'd Up, Im Really Feelin Dis Cuzz, Keep It Poppin Fo Tha Fam
uppin
man o man........man this looks like a mixtape track except it's typed .......didnt really feel the movement because it addressed as some shyt i done heard before drugs money ......tryin to get power and respect...i can understand it's a hustle but do ya'll really do that shyt in real life or yall style coppin'?
You know there is a good explination why I don't feel this as much.......because it was deep but the rhyming was too simple you should try using different words and also better concepts all 3 verses had the same type of words in it switch the styles up a little it would be really good with more imagery and vocabulary also creatibity spark the imagination all three should elevate on this........
chill my nigga.......its all good.............newbs are you a little while ago...........................................nice peice if it mean anything..................
uppin
yo this tha 1st tyme ive checked this piece an its hot...real hot...all ya'll had good flow an multies an tha lines an everything was just good...
all yall keep it up an keep reppin them Dissorderly N****z!!!
I didn't even realize this was still open uppin for feed.................. lmao