Great wordplay man. Overall good peice and it all flows well whilst staying on topic. also you can realte to it and almost see it whilst you read it. good work.
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Great wordplay man. Overall good peice and it all flows well whilst staying on topic. also you can realte to it and almost see it whilst you read it. good work.
safe England
theres was loads of multies dude...are we on the same page here????????Quote:
Originally Posted by Ex Calibur
DOH!
It was nice, a big change from reading faggots postin' fillers and wordless lines of 'Fuck, Nigga and Bitch'. Lol.
Imagery, Multi's, Vocab., it had it all. Keep it up.
hot as usual.........niccas gon' stop sleeping on you Though......
liked that sapphire skies line
8.5/10