The Hero that lead to Evil.

Nicely done my man. Im glad to see stuff like this in my first week being on RapBattles. First off, your topic here was nice, it was not a played topic, nor did you use it improperly. You did a very well job on approaching it. Your rhyme shceme was ok. It could have been slightly better, adding more multies in the mix, but you did do a good job. The flow became choppy in some parts, but nothing serious. The structure was fine, easy to follow along with. Overall, nice job Silas. Im looking forward to seeing more from you in future reference. You have the potential of becoming a great writer someday. But as of now, your above average.

Please return the favor on my own work:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=279120

Thanks for the feed, last bump.