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nice drop bounce.....didn't expect anything less from u since i've read some of your OM's before and also had the chance of u leaving some feedback on one of mine which was a honor to have a mod look at it....but i liked the way u standed on topic none the less leavin a question at the end was a good why to end your OM...alot of emotion was used in this...and your vocab was on point...really made it was it was....nice job i give u a 10/10......because u simply did that great....peace
-Quest
Thanks everyone, I kind of stopped droping in OM for a long while. it's nice to be back at it...
up...
*Brushes off Bounce's dick*
Ooooooook, while yes, this was brilliant piece... In terms of what YOU'RE capable of I don't think this really measured up at all. I didn't like how in the begining you kept refferancing in a "I am the... (This), I am the... (That)." It felt very artificial and Guess Who like, which for me kind of threw off the full effect of your roll play. I would have loved to have seen you take a more metaphorical approach and give the Ebola virus more of a human like personality. Just have a large masterpiece of beautiful personification in order to really define that twist at the end when you find out that its NOT a man but a virus. So, I mean, I respect it for its sheer creativity and above average content and approach... But when I look back at what else you've done it just doesn't measure up at all for me. Oh, and the flow was amazing, that was definately on point. It was kinda slow to come in the begining but after the first few bars it just pick up and was so intense and intricate. So, great piece but I know you've got better.
... I'd really apreciate it if you could check out my OM: "The Garden of Eden"
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=275365
yo hot shyt nigga . i was feelin da whole thing nice flow.
Thanks everyone
damn, I really liked this piece, I could image everything you was saying, your imagery was hot man for real... and the the vocab and words you choose just made the imagery felt that much more..
...to quitely kill & leave few to fuel the fires that rage against me
a pathogenic gun for hire whose only desire,
...is to aquire a new host & spread my seed of death within thee
I thought those lines were dope man, this piece was very good
A solid 8.5/10
Hmmmm..............Cool. This 'stanza' looked like you were talking or making a speech to a big crowd if you know what I mean. The drop was very meaningful and I feel your pieces are getting stronger and stronger depth wise. Your flow is flawless man, and so is your audio flow. The shit is crazy. The emotion of your pieces are inexplicable, mysitfying, and cyptical. The way you portray your message here is insane, I enjoyed the ending lines also. They had meaning which is always great when I read your pieces. Thanks for the read. Feel free to give feed on the link in my sig, I appreciate everything. Piece.Quote:
...to quitely kill & leave few to fuel the fires that rage against me
a pathogenic gun for hire whose only desire,
...is to aquire a new host & spread my seed of death within thee
eternal rest's my gift via fits of haemorrhagic fever,
...receivers bleeding from their ass, mouth, ears, nose and eyes
surprised by the rapid onset of death I dished in their tribes,
..I've thrived under controlled conditions, primmed for munitions
designed for politicians control of various sects,
...vary the sex & I kill with the same skill of a madman gone vexed
enter the sandman, the only question's who's next?