The Chronicles of Life and Death

well I found the structure hard to read but I felt the flow - no doubt favorite line ------------- was the last four lines I love hearing real shit like that but shit was hot keep it up and I like the akward flow

hell ya. thanks for the feed y'all....still uppin.

still uppin for feed. thanks.

yo..this could have had better structure cuz it was all over the plac ena dit effected the flow...rhymes were pretty good..sum were good sum were descnet not too may simple ones...mutlies were lacked.....topic was cool..interesting and it was enjoyable to read....overall this was good..keep at it

i agree with most of that esp about the structure...but lacking multis???? hmm. idk about that.