And The Wall Said...Ft. Automatic

I was feeling this. Liked the multis and vocabulary, the flow was nice. Good stuff.

Thanks.

yo this was anice piece...lookin good...

had sum nice wordplay an sum beautiful multies...this coulda used a hook/chorus tho...

but still 9/10...keep it up

I hit all the links. Thanks.

Word, thanks.

Pretty good

The first stanza almost seemed to concerned about rhyme scheme. Try to switch it up here and there so it doesnt take away fromt he piece.

Pretty good imagery here... I prefer more storytelling aspects but this was good for what it was.

Cheers...


Peep my stuff and such

Good looks, chrit.

*goes to find some of you'r stuff*

Last bump, and im going to make an new OM.

Word, last upp.