i liked this peice. vocab was strong, and your flow seemed pretty consistent, bit choppy towards the end. but it was good. good multis and your rhymes were pretty good. nice peice. keep it up.:)
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i liked this peice. vocab was strong, and your flow seemed pretty consistent, bit choppy towards the end. but it was good. good multis and your rhymes were pretty good. nice peice. keep it up.:)
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Originally Posted by Arsenic P
fosho.. thats what it is
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thanx shaz for tha feed, & the rest yall fuckin dried herbz! fa real.. lmfao
i mean i be leavin honest feed in ur shiit not my fault yall don't be readin stickes & follow tha goddam rulez! but yo who cares what yall say about my ish... i ent sayin nuttin.....1 yeah..
upps...
I liked the meaning behind this piece. Some lines I didn't like that much but other than that this was good here. The vocab and structure were cool. I'll give it a 6/10.
u is good mami im not new juss new to this site u got made skillz gurl keeep ur vacab and no u arnt consistant bu that is easly fixed juss keep practicng your skill then yuo will be sumin to reakin with iiaght
thanx lady & massiv.. feed appriciated i kno itz not perfect but itz good stil..
sleepers sleepers yall muhf''kin sleepers... huh.........
i liked the way you did somethin new it made it more interestin an i could feel how you felt it flowed very well an it had vocab in it you did ya thang on this one ma peace out
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