thanks for the feed ppl...anymore.
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thanks for the feed ppl...anymore.
Not to bad, imagery is slacking (details details details). the rhyming seemed pretty basic.. I could expect more from both of you...*is disapointed* The story line was decent... kind of reminded me a "stan" thing.. vocabulary could have been used in some sparts and of course wordplay... but most def upping for both of you..Late