Thugs: Life and Death

nice joint pak.. tite structure.. steady flo.. coo vocabs..
amagery was good.. pretty blunt..interesting rhyme set up.. i was wrriting some lines earler in a similar manner.. having the rhymes change per line and workin on internal rhymes

dope piece in all fosho.. u elevating in a short space of time

stay up

Thanks dog, preciate ya comments

you dont it again and it wasent all demonic...you tryed something new i guess in the not all crazy shit...and still drop a hot ass verse dang main you need to give me some pointers...iight nigga

this was a pretty good drop man i like it alot

aiight I won't front I liked it though the flow was akward but you just killed it at the end favorite line -- my legs like sone / crumble and fall / I was never humble at all / yet I try to stall / time by praying to God -- a light shines --------------- and every thing after that was quotable keep it up

Thanks for all the preciation and thanks for takin out time and readin it

Nice...rythm was pretty consistant and you kept tha topic on point...
i was feelin tha street vibe but it wasnt like you were tryin to be gangsta just real talk

hey dude this shit was 300 degree if i had a change to sing it i may do it ....nice shot man

Thanks for preciation, yeah this aint gangsta talk, this is the ture thug shit, the shit we see on streets, hear about and all.......Dbl-d if ya wanna sing it, sing it....just remeber ta give me credit lol

Damn this was NICE!! I was gonna quote my favorite lines but I just would have quoted the whole verse hahahahaha. I just read that other joint you did and thought that was hot, well gotdamn this was even better. Never fail to amaze me. This was on some real thug shit. Good perspectives. I can't say ANYTHING negative about it. Flow was perfect, Multis were nice, great Imagery, real Creative. 10/10. Yep. Peace.

Thanks preciate it.........Ayo J.Christ wat happened now dog, this shit aint written in hidden diaries, it ain't shakespeare either.........It's straight thug, how come you aint commented huh J

yo Pak this is tha type of shit i like to see...keep it up dogg!!

i cant say nothin bad bout this peice cuz it was all good:tha flow, tha structure, tha creativity, tha vocab...all great...way to go homes...

9.5/10

this was coo.........good imagery and the multi's were coo.......flow was tight but i bit off though..............

Thanks for preciation ma dogs

so pak are you gonna give me some pointers...