Kronik Boom VS Sem

Need Some More Votes Uppin Again 4th Time
Need Some More Votes Uppin Again 4th Time
Need Some More Votes Uppin Again 4th Time

Need Some More Votes Uppin Again 5th Time
Need Some More Votes Uppin Again 5th Time
Need Some More Votes Uppin Again

Kronik-
it seems that its way better and elevated from the one i just voted against you on, your structure is way better then before and i can tell your elevate'n..........slowly but your elevate'n and thas wat counts your lines weren't too stretched and your punches were weak but you wasn't so S/G so thas good keep it up

Sem-
You lines were too stretched and you wordplay were garbage especially your opener just to let you kno camelians doesn't change styles they change colors you should look into that but neway, your kinda s/g so you loss points on that you should work on that also plus your punches which should be metas and multies elevation is a must

v:-------: Kronik