yeah kool RS... it werent meant 2 be dope at all.. lol...
jus a lil thang feel me...
*yawns*
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yeah kool RS... it werent meant 2 be dope at all.. lol...
jus a lil thang feel me...
*yawns*
yo laydee i wanna battle
aiite if ya wana battle me go 2 bitch slapped & i'll holla at cha there init..
don't post that shiit in here feel me.. if ya ent got feed fo this then dont post herb..
s'all good gurl...holl@ 'cha boi anytime you need sumthin
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Originally Posted by RhymeSkeme
:2thumb: aiite kool hun...1
come on uppin dis muthafuka...
good flow.. good emotional hate and expression against the person u hatin on..
needs more stable wordplay and punches...
needs some more concept... seemed like a bunch of wild accusations... self fabrications...had sum good rhymes....sum rhymes seemed forced
u can take my advice or stick it where the sun dont shine
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click this 1
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=270425
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Originally Posted by NiNjah Red
firstly it werent aimed at anyone DIRECTLY".. & i didnt express hate i just wrote down tha truth.. get me.. it werent anything special just a message for them fags.. but yeah thanx for checkin it out & tha feed i'll check ya shiit out 2...1
yeah that was a tight piece.
flow-A
Imagery-A
Mets-A
overall it was just a great drop ------G.D.
I see you be doing ya thang on here much respect 2 ya..................
aiite thanx change feed appriciated..1 lurv... ^^^
Now that was a Hot Piece as well...
Lot's of punches and good punches they were
the piece flowed well exempting certain points
you started off strong and finished the same
you also provided the reader with some good visuals
so overall I'd say that it was a great drop
change thanx again aiite... 1....
upps.....
girl you bringin the struth aint chu? this was hot liked the flow you brought and also i enjoyed the topic it was real and thats what i like: the real not the fake
I question, but i never disrespect anyone's wor I liked this couz it really challenges the people on this sight because it seemz that rap battles on this sight is a big ass joke and that need to be changed like the owner said the other day about the same thing. freestyling is a gift and some youngins on here just be doing it to diss people and rme we all one come with the real skill and do it the right way, ya dig so i understand where you coming from ma!
corrections
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